Hi it's a quick question will there be a sequel because I think the story holds up and what's more it's really nice I want to discover the dark story of the wolf that's all that's all ^_^
well golden timing now, some new vn try to debut in itch and got some critics but their story is ok.
What I'm saying is don't go over for two year, don't rush thing. New vn might have opportunity now but you should release some leak to maintain status and keep people aware this vn.
Vn name extracurricular activity about to finish their last route (i mean it's their focus) same for tennis ace since their 3 major route have many day now and might finish soon.
If personal get in the way, clear it first then come back. Buried love or something, the Author himself come back from health issues now (in quiet for a while) if ghost over year like him can come back, no reason you rush game and abandoned personal matter & health.
Im confused... did the game get canceled, or is it full release already? I see the status says "released" but it is still saying 1.0 for the version (which is what the original was), however, the last devlog said that he was still making it... is it gonna just be for patreon release or is there gonna be a public one to...?
Hello! I'm very glad you've taken interest into my project! As other visual novels alike, they also have the game on "released" but are unfinished, and still in the works, unless stated with their release. Please keep that in mind with all projects alike.
As of now, I'm putting things in their places, and polishing things up.
As well as me, a single person leading the project, who's in charge of witting, proof reading, revising, grammar checking, editing, commissioning backgrounds, CG's BG's and sprites, and music. All of this comes out of my pocket, and no one else's.
I do all of this while also dealing with personal life events that hindered my progression with this project of mine.
I can guarantee you it's coming, but I cannot give a certain date, but it's near complete for the next build. That I can assure you. So it'll just pop up one day ready to read in the near future!
So, thank you for taking the time to read this. You, and other curious, and eager readers alike.
Alright… There is too much to ask and few will get an answer. I took a little time to read, and I can say… Is this story done in a mater of loosing memory from the main character’s perspective? Or is it like a reborn in a new world?
That is what I believe bringmethefurries was wondering… but I understand on his perspective that there are more questions than answers. But to be fair we can only get the answers from the story not the developer. I know there is something that will be answered by the story, and that’s what VN’s are based on. I have read multiple VN’s and many of them still hold the mystery for a good time.
The other… MC reacting to the situation in a very calm demeanor. Like he knows where he is, yet he doesn’t remember. He doesn’t panic, but tries to pressure for an answer yet almost none get answered. For this, I can say the speed of the situation is a faster and there is less thinking coming from MC. He seems less affected than normally it lets to be.
He might be coping, but still for us readers there is a vast contrast on showing if he is ok or not in the situation. And here it shows little thinking of the situation. He is really calm, almost frightened more so. But, to defend to the person dealing with the writing. There are multiple ways a person can react to a situation, and depending on the experiences it had it can be calm, or it can be outright an outburst of emotions.
Now. This is what I think how this starter holds up. The story how it starts feels like the person who we know as MC (The main character, Reese) was killed. Yet it doesn’t seem that way… This is one of the first points I found confusing. Void can be linked as dead, but after taking a lesson with Spark I can see the other meaning, the mind in a blank state. Void of anything.
We know there is more to the world, since we get the feel of the fantasy world at some point. Magic or a similar force to it exist in this world. The story is interesting it hooked me for a while, where I lost it was in the phasing of the scenarios. They feel rushed but with enough to read and understand the situation… But there is a lack of something always popping up here and there.
This feeling of lack, lack of something, holds the story back. Back enough to make me wonder what is missing. Yet I do not have a full answer to it. I feel is in writing, but it could be the lack of construction on the scenarios… or it could be the lack of speed in scenarios feeling like a flash memory instead of a more meaningful moment.
As for the story as a whole right now… It can hold its ground. I know there is more to see and do want to know what is in store for the next build.
I do hope you can get through this rough time you are having, Krow. Many of us happened to have those moments of grief, take your time and work slowly to your goal. Just don’t burn your self by trying to please the public first. Take care for what it is trully important at this moment.
i'm not saying the game is bad but the story is so confusing sometimes, the protagonist doesn't have any memories but is perfectly okay with everything, plus so far you haven't even come close to answering any questions the readers might have. I know the story is supposed to be mysterious but at this rate we'll be left with 10 times more questions than answers
The protag is NOT okay with everything happening. If you're just freaking out the whole time, it wouldn't be interesting, and the character would end up looking like a babbling lost cause maniac more than the mc. There are times where the mc does express disinterest. More things unfold later, and not all questions would be answered all at once. If it did, then the whole vn would end in 3 to 4 builds.
Right?? I know it's been 9 months but anyway, some people dislike comments for no reason. I've been a victim myself, so here's another 2 likes from a fellow victim. I've seen you around quite a bit and you don't seem the trouble-making kind to me.
Seems interesting but the demo is extremely short, I can't get much of a grasp on any of the characters or story, it's more of showing of the sprites and game testing than a demo. But with more content I'm sure I'll be more interested in the game.
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Hi it's a quick question will there be a sequel because I think the story holds up and what's more it's really nice I want to discover the dark story of the wolf that's all that's all ^_^
The story is being continued and worked on. Soloing and managing this project at my expense causes the project to be sluggish in progression.
oh ok i see i see^^
well golden timing now, some new vn try to debut in itch and got some critics but their story is ok.
What I'm saying is don't go over for two year, don't rush thing. New vn might have opportunity now but you should release some leak to maintain status and keep people aware this vn.
Vn name extracurricular activity about to finish their last route (i mean it's their focus) same for tennis ace since their 3 major route have many day now and might finish soon.
If personal get in the way, clear it first then come back. Buried love or something, the Author himself come back from health issues now (in quiet for a while) if ghost over year like him can come back, no reason you rush game and abandoned personal matter & health.
Thing might go high soon.
Im confused... did the game get canceled, or is it full release already? I see the status says "released" but it is still saying 1.0 for the version (which is what the original was), however, the last devlog said that he was still making it... is it gonna just be for patreon release or is there gonna be a public one to...?
Hello! I'm very glad you've taken interest into my project! As other visual novels alike, they also have the game on "released" but are unfinished, and still in the works, unless stated with their release. Please keep that in mind with all projects alike.
As of now, I'm putting things in their places, and polishing things up.
As well as me, a single person leading the project, who's in charge of witting, proof reading, revising, grammar checking, editing, commissioning backgrounds, CG's BG's and sprites, and music. All of this comes out of my pocket, and no one else's.
I do all of this while also dealing with personal life events that hindered my progression with this project of mine.
I can guarantee you it's coming, but I cannot give a certain date, but it's near complete for the next build. That I can assure you. So it'll just pop up one day ready to read in the near future!
So, thank you for taking the time to read this. You, and other curious, and eager readers alike.
Is this a finished project or..?
Will there be an update in the future? >.>
Alright… There is too much to ask and few will get an answer. I took a little time to read, and I can say… Is this story done in a mater of loosing memory from the main character’s perspective? Or is it like a reborn in a new world?
That is what I believe bringmethefurries was wondering… but I understand on his perspective that there are more questions than answers. But to be fair we can only get the answers from the story not the developer. I know there is something that will be answered by the story, and that’s what VN’s are based on. I have read multiple VN’s and many of them still hold the mystery for a good time.
The other… MC reacting to the situation in a very calm demeanor. Like he knows where he is, yet he doesn’t remember. He doesn’t panic, but tries to pressure for an answer yet almost none get answered. For this, I can say the speed of the situation is a faster and there is less thinking coming from MC. He seems less affected than normally it lets to be.
He might be coping, but still for us readers there is a vast contrast on showing if he is ok or not in the situation. And here it shows little thinking of the situation. He is really calm, almost frightened more so. But, to defend to the person dealing with the writing. There are multiple ways a person can react to a situation, and depending on the experiences it had it can be calm, or it can be outright an outburst of emotions.
Now. This is what I think how this starter holds up. The story how it starts feels like the person who we know as MC (The main character, Reese) was killed. Yet it doesn’t seem that way… This is one of the first points I found confusing. Void can be linked as dead, but after taking a lesson with Spark I can see the other meaning, the mind in a blank state. Void of anything.
We know there is more to the world, since we get the feel of the fantasy world at some point. Magic or a similar force to it exist in this world. The story is interesting it hooked me for a while, where I lost it was in the phasing of the scenarios. They feel rushed but with enough to read and understand the situation… But there is a lack of something always popping up here and there.
This feeling of lack, lack of something, holds the story back. Back enough to make me wonder what is missing. Yet I do not have a full answer to it. I feel is in writing, but it could be the lack of construction on the scenarios… or it could be the lack of speed in scenarios feeling like a flash memory instead of a more meaningful moment.
As for the story as a whole right now… It can hold its ground. I know there is more to see and do want to know what is in store for the next build.
I do hope you can get through this rough time you are having, Krow. Many of us happened to have those moments of grief, take your time and work slowly to your goal. Just don’t burn your self by trying to please the public first. Take care for what it is trully important at this moment.
hello you didnt put an os for each build of the game, ppl using the itch app can't download the game
i'm not saying the game is bad but the story is so confusing sometimes, the protagonist doesn't have any memories but is perfectly okay with everything, plus so far you haven't even come close to answering any questions the readers might have. I know the story is supposed to be mysterious but at this rate we'll be left with 10 times more questions than answers
The protag is NOT okay with everything happening. If you're just freaking out the whole time, it wouldn't be interesting, and the character would end up looking like a babbling lost cause maniac more than the mc. There are times where the mc does express disinterest. More things unfold later, and not all questions would be answered all at once. If it did, then the whole vn would end in 3 to 4 builds.
lethgooooo
oop a update ? damn who said "this is going out just like B101 and Starry Chain.." mentally ill fr.
Welcome back!
Why the dislike? What did I do?
Lmao I dunno but here is a Like to balance things out XD
Right?? I know it's been 9 months but anyway, some people dislike comments for no reason. I've been a victim myself, so here's another 2 likes from a fellow victim. I've seen you around quite a bit and you don't seem the trouble-making kind to me.
Android?!
Is this game completed? And is it a demo or a full game?
Can't wait for more!
"It's okay Rocky. You go when you feel like it."
-Patrick Star
Will there be an update soon? 💗💗🏃🏽♂️
this is going out just like B101 and Starry Chain..
Okay, where's yours?
👀
When will be the next update?
Same lol
The wolf is the first that grab my attention lol
Great game I look forward to seeing more of your work!!! Keep up the great work!!
Seems interesting but the demo is extremely short, I can't get much of a grasp on any of the characters or story, it's more of showing of the sprites and game testing than a demo. But with more content I'm sure I'll be more interested in the game.
😍😍😍
cool, the characters in it are also cool, I wonder if the MC is Human or not?
<3
This looks promising, I’m interested to see more!
oh! new VN? LET'S GO!
This is very cool! Shows a lot of potential and I love the characters :D
Will there be an update soon 🌚💙🧡💚 I am looking forward to completing this visual novel I liked it🥰🏃🏽♂️🏃🏽♂️
👀 Ohh cool I will try it now 🏃🏽♂️🏃🏽♂️💙
First comment, ayyyyyy. Can't wait to see how it goes :D